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“On Writing in General and Writer’s Groups in Particular”
Writing is something I’ve always felt drawn to. I’d read a book and think, yeah, I could write a book…someday. I actually thought I could write a better book than a lot of those I read. After all, writers do need a bit of ego, or in many cases they possess a lot of ego. With a huge heaping helping of humility, I believe I fall somewhere in the middle. Perhaps some of my friends would disagree. But with all that aside, the someday arrived. I sat down and wrote a book. I let it ferment in a drawer for ten years until I pulled it out, dusted it off, and not having a clue as to what to expect, walked through the doors of a conference room at my local library, and the heads of three men snapped around, with mouths agape they stared at me. “Who is this strange creature who has entered our sanctuary?” Their eyes darted back and forth. Undaunted, I adjusted my ego, smiled, and introduced myself. They mumbled their names. Within a few moments, a man, I now call our fearless leader, entered the room. He looked surprised but delighted to see me there. I’d brought with me copies of the first chapter of my book. I explained what genre I wrote in—cozy mysteries. One gentleman, in total disbelief, asked our fearless leader, “Is that really a genre?” The response was, yes, it most certainly is and a popular one. These fellas were writing sci-fi, zombies, and one a kind of fantasy, I think it was a fantasy, but that I never quite figured out. I trudged on. I passed out my chapters for all to read, chatted with them for a while and left brimming with confidence at the kudos I would receive at the next meeting. When I returned two weeks later, our fearless leader had hemorrhaged all over my chapter with his “red pen.” Wow! That surprised me. My ego was bruised…but not broken. I became a little defensive, okay maybe more than a little. I was sure he clearly did not understand the genre I was writing in. Oh, but he did. The more we talked, the more I realized how right he was. My chapter was awful and needed gobs of cutting and rewriting. So, I dug in and went to work.
Write with wild abandon and let it all pour out, then be brutal when you edit. I slashed more than a thousand words out of that first chapter and tightened it until it squealed. Bring the mystery up to the beginning of the book, I was told—show the reader some action—make them want to keep reading. It doesn’t matter what genre you write, you must draw the reader in. from In the words of Mickey Spillane, creator of Mike Hammer, “Nobody reads a mystery to get to the middle. They read it to get to the end. If it’s a letdown, they won’t buy any more. The first page sells that book. The last page sells your next book.” He was spot on.
It’s been three years since I walked through those doors. The three gents who were there then are now gone. Others have come and gone as well. As a group, we are now about ten to twelve strong. All at different levels of writing in a plethora of different genres. We jump in to help others along by critiquing their work. We rejoice when some win awards for their stories, celebrate each other when a book is published, and we pray for some and support them when they go through rough times in their lives. As the pastor in our group once said, we are a family. We actually like to hang out together when we are not meeting in group. We go to lunch, grab a cup of coffee, or visit at each other’s homes.
I have two published books under my belt now, which have been greeted with wonderful reviews. Another book will soon be published. Maybe it would have happened without the support and encouragement of my fellow writers, but I don’t think so. If you don’t have a writers’ group—start one. One of our writers told me her previous group started because a woman put up a simple placard on her table in a coffee shop asking for people interested in writing.
I am fortunate to have found myself in the right place at the right time. I feel blessed. I am a much better writer because of these folks. You know who you are! Thanks.
I wrote this a year or ago, but I believe it bears repeating.
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Review for “First of September” from one of the top “Vine Voice” Amazon Reviewers! I’m thrilled!
5.0 out of 5 starsLots of secrets, intrigue but more than a mystery it’s the story of six good longtime friends
September 16, 2019
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I really enjoyed how this group of six women, now five since the suspicious death of their friend who just returned to town, have stayed friends since kindergarten. They all worked well together when it came to sleuthing. Clare was the main character, but she did a little snooping with her pal Libby, then she ended up doing a lot of the snooping with Bev, since Libby still had small children to take care of. The banter and humor were really good and I had to admire the determination Clare had to find out who had killed their good friend who was no saint, but what in the world could she have done to have gotten someone angry enough to kill her?
I definitely hadn’t guessed the killer until the clues started falling together. I had an idea before Clare knew about it and kept wishing she’d have been as careful at that moment as she had during the rest of the book. But her own ingenuity kicked in, and she was able to take care of the killer herself. Sometimes it paid to keep an older vehicle that people had ragged on her to replace!
The return of this flag from the Netherlands, and the appreciation that country has for Americans who freed them from the clutches of Nazi Germany makes me proud. We the People have sacrificed and brought freedom to people all over the world and within our own borders!!! Remember that. We righted wrongs. So, stand up and be proud of our great country. I know it is popular for many to disrespect our country and flag, but again, remember what it means to people to see the United States rally to their defense and bring them the freedom we enjoy. Stand up to the haters who try to diminish our love of flag and country. We will not allow them to destroy our history!
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An intentional hit-and-run, a vanishing body, a cold case murder, and text messages from a man believed to be dead, cause Birdie Chadwick to turn to sleuthing. She sets off on her banana-yellow Vespa with her friend, Chris, to unravel these mysteries. Birdie is a 52-year-old wife, mother, and shop owner who loves to cook up a storm and spread joy amongst her family and friends. She lives in huge old salt-box house with her professor husband, Elliot, in the charming village of Downriver nestled along the banks of the mighty Ohio River.
Kathleen’s Amelia Bay Series has been met with rave reviews, and this new series will not disappoint her fans!
Marie McNary: A Cozy Experience: Online Cozy Mystery Book Club Don’t wait until September to read this book. First of September is the first installment of the Clare Harrigan Cozy Mystery Series. Clare Harrigan is thrilled when her childhood friend, Addie Halls moves back to Amelia Bay. When Addie dies in what the police are calling an accident, Clare knows it’s up to her to step in and find out what happened to her friend. What she finds are more secrets than she bargained for and it leaves her wondering if she ever really knew Addie as well as she thought she did.
Cynthia Hilston, Author, Goodreads Reviewer, Author: Hannah’s Rainbow, Lorna versus Laura, and A Laughing Matter of Pain
You know that cozy feeling of holding a warm beverage, wrapped in a blanket, and curling up with a good book by the fire? That’s Kathleen Joyce’s cozy mystery…with a murder or two in the mix. This cozy mystery puts you right in the heart of beautiful Northwest America. The characters are charming and come to life off the page. The writing is superb and draws the reader in. The description of the place and the food make me wish I was there. The story will keep you guessing whodunnit.
Kelly Griffiths, Author, Award Winning Short Story Writer Trespass
Kathleen Joyce has truly perfected the cozy style: An enchanting world where even trouble, adventure, and mystery are glazed with gentleness and warmth. Kathleen’s command of character and setting leaves me smiling and wanting more and more of the world she creates.
Lee Wilson, Writer/Anthropologist Congress Whispers, Reservation Nations Endure
I so enjoyed Kathleen Joyce’s new murder mystery, First of September. It transported me into a circle of longtime friends as their lives rolled with the gentle breezes, and threatening storms, of shared childhood memories. Her detailed descriptions of multi-faceted characters drew me into this story of one dynamic woman’s search for justice.
A Cozy Experience: Online Cozy Mystery Book Club
Mary Halverson Schofield, Author, River of Champions and Henry Boucha: Star of the North
A perfect cozy mystery to get lost in anywhere, anytime… The setting in the Pacific Northwest is brought beautifully into focus by the author, and is almost a character in the book. The author weaves in a wonderful set of folks with which to paint her story. You can’t help but rooting for Clare as she navigates through her own life, and the murder she knows has been committed. Twists and turns, of course, which make it fun, mysterious and a marvelously good read.
Five Star Reviews from Readers on Amazon
I loved this book and can’t wait for the next!
I enjoyed every bit of getting to know Clare and her girlfriends. They remind me so much of my own group of best girlfriends. The picture painted of the Pacific Northwest was immersive and I could picture and get the feeling of life in Amelia Bay. I want to go eat in the pub and take a walk through town!
First time reading this author. Can’t wait till next book. For a girl from OH she knows a lot about Amelia Bay.
Really enjoyed this book filled with charming and real characters. The story and mystery is a great read. I look forward to reading more (hint hint) and going back into this town and living among the characters.
If you love cozy mysteries with wit, charm and well-developed entertaining characters, then this is an immensely enjoyable read. It kept me in suspense until the end and I look forward to more from this talented author!
I thought the novel was great. It held my interest right up until the end. Normally pretty good at solving mysteries, I missed the mark initially on this one. It was easy to picture Amelia Bay due to the detailed descriptions. Felt like I was there. Definitely a good read.
I really enjoyed this book. I couldn’t put it down. The friendship that these ladies had reminds me of my girlfriends and I could connect easily with the characters. I highly recommend this book. You won’t be disappointed.
Do yourself a favor…slow down, take an afternoon to curl up and read 1st of September!! You will have given yourself a special treat!
I am totally enjoying this mystery and look forward to the continuing series. Thank you, Miss Joyce, I love it.
A nice cozy mystery. The author’s description of food in the story will leave your mouth watering and the mystery will leave you guessing…
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